XRaider's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness Aggravation]

You must have really hated making it then.

But it's decent for a first attempt at flash.

SilenzXE responds:

=/

Nope was pretty fun.

[Speed Paint A Rose]

It was pretty good.

Your artwork is great, but im afraid that your animation skills aren't as great, keep practicing and I know you will get better.

catfor responds:

hahaha thnx dude, I'll i'm just beginning.. and if i don't lost the interest, i'll be better

[Redness Trailer v2]

OMG!

HAI ALPHA! J00 Guessed who I iz.
GO REDNASS! WOO! I LIKE COOKIES!

DO YOU LAIK COOKIES! YOU CAN HAVE A COOKIE!

Alpha-Nuva responds:

Yayzorz!

BTW, you have sum mudkipz? these cookies need moar mudkipz! olololololo

[Madness: Ignoramus]

Hai Alpha!

I bet j00 can't guess who I iz!

Anyways 10/10.

Alpha-Nuva responds:

j00 b train of double w00+

[Madness Neurosis Collab]

It was good.

It was good except for one or two parts. It was also good working on this collab with you all.

LLL- Your part was good but it was just like 'I am going to rip his head off with no effort' sort of. If you know what I mean.

Wolfinator-X- Your part lacked kills. The animation was OK but I did get bored while watching. It is still better than the first part you did.

YK-Blaze- Your part lacked wounds. It only had bullet wounds. When he took his head off there was no wound. The second part of yours was much better.

XRaider (Me)- The sound was out of time and the animation was slow (It was originally 33fps, thats why.)

SSmurf- I like your parts even though the firt did not have feet it was still good.

d00dfayz- It was good but it looked quite tweened. It doesn't matter if it was because it is just as hard as FbF. I liked most of it but the feet went below the body.

Davebot- Your part was alright although the physics were not fully correct. The beretta would not fly that far. I know physics is hard. It is one of the hardest thing in madess animations.

Overall it was good, liked most of the comics but the animation extras were not as good.

Hope the second turns out better. (Even though I am in it again.)

8/10.

~XRaider.

YK-Blaze responds:

lol i did use a ripoff blood when his head got out
every one has somthing to improve thats always true anuwau thanks for the 4/5 :D

[World of Warcraft short]

Decent.

It's good for a first submission. Heres some stuff to improve on though.

Please read through all of this review.

First of all when they turn it looks like they are flat. Try not to do that. Draw different angles of them. This takes more time but comes out great.
Second of all add some sounds other than the music from that cartoon (I forget what it's called)
Third make a longer movie. I know this is meant to be a short but try make a longer movie next time.
Fourth it looked too tweened. Try to do FbF (Frame by frame) Which is putting each limb on a different layer and animating them one at a time without using tweens. Takes much longer but it makes movements look more realistic when used correctly.
Fifth I like your style of drawing.
Sixth keep making somewhat humorous cartoons. It seems to suit you.

I hope you improve on the next one. Try to follow some of the critisism I have said. It will make your movies so much better.

-XRaider.

Buttered-Noodle responds:

Thanks for your input! I will probably keep the way they turn though hehe ^_^

[Madness Inaguration]

It was good but just a few things

You did quite a good job. But things were moving too quickly and some of the sounds were wrong. But other than that it was good. I hope to see more for you LittleLuckyLink...

-XRaider.

LittleLuckyLink responds:

You will see more.......You will.

[Blue vs Blue 3]

Well...

You have been watching too much Black Vs White...

enigon301 responds:

Yeah i couldnt help my self but youse the eyes i mean there so perfect on stick figures i had to try it out!
i didnt think it would turn out good
but it did YAY!

[Can't Reach the Screen]

Pretty good.

I doubt it will survive the portal. Voted 3. Also if anyone is wondering the song is called 'Jerk it Out'

Penboy responds:

Thanks :)

[Madness: S.W.A.T]

Pretty good.

Just one thing... Aren't you doing the madness collab? Lol.

YK-Blaze responds:

so what?
if im working on a collab i cant send my own movies? XD