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Amazing.

Perfect. I see no flaws at all. This had a great dark scary feeling to it. It is just amazing. I am speechless. Well not really otherwise I would not be writing this. I really can't believe it.

Great!

The animation wasn't the best but it was still good.

redfox45 MGS4 is coming out on the 360 aswell. Halo will kick it's ass but not by much. Both are great games.

HAHAHA!

This is perfect. I watched it over and over and I was still laughing over it!

Lol.

The commentary was funny.

HOSTAGE BITCH!!!!

LOL!

This was good like the other ones.

I saw them before you put them on NG. And Cashley there is going to be no more. This is the last short until MC8.

Well...

Took some ideas from black vs white I see... Still watching too much black vs white?

Decent.

It's good for a first submission. Heres some stuff to improve on though.

Please read through all of this review.

First of all when they turn it looks like they are flat. Try not to do that. Draw different angles of them. This takes more time but comes out great.
Second of all add some sounds other than the music from that cartoon (I forget what it's called)
Third make a longer movie. I know this is meant to be a short but try make a longer movie next time.
Fourth it looked too tweened. Try to do FbF (Frame by frame) Which is putting each limb on a different layer and animating them one at a time without using tweens. Takes much longer but it makes movements look more realistic when used correctly.
Fifth I like your style of drawing.
Sixth keep making somewhat humorous cartoons. It seems to suit you.

I hope you improve on the next one. Try to follow some of the critisism I have said. It will make your movies so much better.

-XRaider.

Buttered-Noodle responds:

Thanks for your input! I will probably keep the way they turn though hehe ^_^

Meh. A thing though.

Those evil mario sprites look like daniel suns

Wow.

That was amazing. I'm speechless. Keep going like this and you will have a piece of work in the top 10!

It was good but just a few things

You did quite a good job. But things were moving too quickly and some of the sounds were wrong. But other than that it was good. I hope to see more for you LittleLuckyLink...

-XRaider.

LittleLuckyLink responds:

You will see more.......You will.

Sup

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